http://efsw04.edublogs.org Another excellent Edublogs.org weblog Wed, 15 Apr 2009 20:31:16 +0000 http://backend.userland.com/rss092 en They are coming to see Pink Floyd But no threat of rain can stop Twenty thousand rock fans from flocking to Cincinnati’s River-front Coliseum. Although the concert is still three hours away the concert has already attracted early birds, and they are all dressed in their typical rock fan clothes, and ... http://efsw04.edublogs.org/2009/04/15/combining-sentences/ Christine Gregoire is increasing the price of college, decreasing the ability to attend, and eliminating the opportunity for everyone.  http://efsw04.edublogs.org/2009/04/13/tricolontetricolon/ (                      ) What is it to be blank, to be boring, to be absent minded? Does it mean that something crucial is missing, something so important that when deemed blank there is  nothing to survive off.  Truly blank is the greatest of ... http://efsw04.edublogs.org/2009/04/08/11/ 1. To the author a rant is something thatis meaning full. Ranting is something that one has to do with passion to have any sort of effect. The baseball quote was an exaple of one that had no meaning behind it. 2. The age of the web allows people to complain ... http://efsw04.edublogs.org/2009/03/06/ranting/ Happy. Happy is the overwhellming feeling when what you have been waiting for arrives. Happyness is the end of anticipation. It is what you feel when you complete your acomplishments. When the work that you have done represents who you are and what you believe in. Happyness is no longer ... http://efsw04.edublogs.org/2009/03/04/what-is-it-to-be-happy/ In this article there is a very well written introductory hook. Anna Banks uses specific details to creat a fealling for the situation that we are in. She utalizes the story of her grandmother's life to present an intresting and intreguing begining to her story. Anna Banks use emotion to ... http://efsw04.edublogs.org/2009/02/11/stop-me/ 1. The wind wipped around the corner of the nearest brick building, whistling through the cracks in the wall it hit me. A sense of heroism, pushed me to walk out into the open. 2. The teachers voice faded, as i seemingly began to drift farther and farther away from the ... http://efsw04.edublogs.org/2009/02/06/showing-scentences/ 1. He uses event that happened in the past to create a sense of connectedness when he starts out his paper. 2.He uses horrible things that occured durring their time and what they made it through, to relate it to what is going o today. 3.He shows all the obsticles that his ... http://efsw04.edublogs.org/2009/02/04/tomorrow-will-be-a-better-day/ This essay had wonderful imagery that truly engulfed me in the traditional style of this frabjous essay. Although the essay was mysteriously ironic, seeing as this person is against technology but utilizing the tinternet to its fullest advertisement purposes. although this lady is surprisingly original i can not believe her ... http://efsw04.edublogs.org/2009/02/04/this-i-believe-essay-review/ In the past i have been acquainted with writing from a very young age.   Every time that i write i get this intensly warm feeling inside. Every word that i write is a key to another emotion that i have experienced. Wether it is evil or nice, plentaful like ... http://efsw04.edublogs.org/2009/02/04/first-postado/