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Combining Sentences

April 15th, 2009 | Uncategorized | No comments

They are coming to see Pink Floyd But no threat of rain can stop Twenty thousand rock fans from flocking to Cincinnati’s River-front Coliseum.

Although the concert is still three hours away the concert has already attracted early birds, and they are all dressed in their typical rock fan clothes, and you can feel the high [...]

Tricolon/Tetricolon

April 13th, 2009 | Uncategorized | No comments

Christine Gregoire is increasing the price of college, decreasing the ability to attend, and eliminating the opportunity for everyone. 

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April 8th, 2009 | Uncategorized | No comments

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What is it to be blank, to be boring, to be absent minded? Does it mean that something crucial is missing, something so important that when deemed blank there is  nothing to survive off.  Truly blank is the greatest of complements. When someone believes that [...]

RANTING

March 6th, 2009 | Uncategorized | No comments

1. To the author a rant is something thatis meaning full. Ranting is something that one has to do with passion to have any sort of effect. The baseball quote was an exaple of one that had no meaning behind it.
2. The age of the web allows people to complain and rant about anything. There [...]

What is it to be HAPPY

March 4th, 2009 | Uncategorized | No comments

Happy. Happy is the overwhellming feeling when what you have been waiting for arrives. Happyness is the end of anticipation. It is what you feel when you complete your acomplishments. When the work that you have done represents who you are and what you believe in. Happyness is no longer the need to depend or [...]

Stop Me

February 11th, 2009 | Uncategorized | No comments

In this article there is a very well written introductory hook. Anna Banks uses specific details to creat a fealling for the situation that we are in. She utalizes the story of her grandmother’s life to present an intresting and intreguing begining to her story. Anna Banks use emotion to draw you in such as [...]

Showing Scentences

February 6th, 2009 | Uncategorized | No comments

1. The wind wipped around the corner of the nearest brick building, whistling through the cracks in the wall it hit me. A sense of heroism, pushed me to walk out into the open.
2. The teachers voice faded, as i seemingly began to drift farther and farther away from the reality of the borring benevalent [...]

Tomorrow will be a better day.

February 4th, 2009 | Uncategorized | No comments

1. He uses event that happened in the past to create a sense of connectedness when he starts out his paper.
2.He uses horrible things that occured durring their time and what they made it through, to relate it to what is going o today.
3.He shows all the obsticles that his parents and grandparents had to [...]

This I believe Essay Review

February 4th, 2009 | Uncategorized | No comments

This essay had wonderful imagery that truly engulfed me in the traditional style of this frabjous essay. Although the essay was mysteriously ironic, seeing as this person is against technology but utilizing the tinternet to its fullest advertisement purposes. although this lady is surprisingly original i can not believe her writing seeing as it is [...]

first postado

February 4th, 2009 | Uncategorized | No comments

In the past i have been acquainted with writing from a very young age.   Every time that i write i get this intensly warm feeling inside. Every word that i write is a key to another emotion that i have experienced. Wether it is evil or nice, plentaful like spice. There was this one [...]